Looks like I'm gonna build my shelter again

Such a messed up world we're living in today

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jaratekid
How am I doing? Let me know, please!

Just keep in mind a few things before you comment:


  • I haven't played a huge amount of TF2. Most of what I know is based on watching others play and watching the Meet The ___ videos. I am awful at FPS games, honestly. :[
  • I'm not confident with typing out Sniper's accent. I just kind of drop it and write any spoken words as I would normally. This isn't to say he isn't speaking in an Australian accent, though, because he is. :)

I welcome all constructive criticism, just be nice about it (e.g: no 'your Sniper sucks, he's the worst') please.

All comments will be screened by default but if you DO NOT mind it being unscreened, or you want to see my reply, LET ME KNOW. LJ unscreens comments by default once they're replied to so I will rescreen it if you don't say anything. Then you will not get a response. :[ Anon is enabled but at the first sign of trolling it will be disabled.

Thanks a bunch, mate!
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I don't mind this being unscreened :)

Your Sniper sucks, he's the worst!

I'm kidding. :) You play a very, and I mean very, convincing Sniper. I don't mind you not typing out the accent in full; in fact, I appreciate the way you write his speech. (Personally, I find "accented" dialogue harder to follow.)

Merci pour les bons moments!

Re: I don't mind this being unscreened :)

Thanks! :D I'm really glad to know I'm doing alright. I was worried about the accent thing, but as long as everyone knows that he has one, it doesn't need to be typed out all of the time.

Your Spy is great, too, and I love how you're writing his side of the fight. I haven't RPed fights a whole lot, so I know I can use some more practice, but you seem to definitely know what you're doing.

Re: I don't mind this being unscreened :)

Thank you! I'm happy you're enjoying this. And hey, no need to be so modest; you're writing that fight scene just great. Honestly, this is the most fun I've had in months in RP.

Re: I don't mind this being unscreened :)

Pff, modest, schmodest. I'm not modest at all.

I'm having lots of fun too! I actually just picked up RED Scout the other day, so I can play him with any of your characters later on, if you'd like. :)

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